Teh Wozzinator

my edits will be in bold... Hey this is my first thing to ever post so keep that in mind when you read this! I need the criticism, so please ...

i really liked the story and your "half dragon" people, but "The Dragon Story" is way too cliche and generic. try something more like Dragon Half ooh, i like that, ...

here's chapter one...hopefully i won't mess up and double post this time. my edits are in bold... Chapter 1 Unexpected Guests On a rainy, warm, i think that maybe this ...

ok, here's the prologue (sorry, i'll probably mention things other people said, because i didn't read the other reviews) Prologue Ah, death. The thing many fear because they think it ...

ok, here's the prologue (sorry, i'll probably mention things other people said, because i didn't read the other reviews) Prologue Ah, death. The thing many fear because they think it ...

This was great! I agree with Gryphon that it flows like a poem and I noticed no mistakes. It was beautifully written. I liked the mentions of the orchestra and ...

hey, my first PG-13 work! lol! this is just a short story i wrote, and i know that parts of it are pretty rough with grammar and wording, so feel ...

lol, when are you going to post it?? oh, tomorrow...(btw, you already said that your ear was aching when you wrote it--lol!) PM me when five's done

oh wow, it's over already? that was quick...anyways, i think that the epilogue and her going home to her mother were way way way way way too rushed. you need ...

ok, chapter four... Chapter 4 That after no space here noon Jamie and Dymus went on a walk throught no "t" at the end the city. Jamie looks at everything ...

wow, the very end of that was greatly descriptive. amazing. as usual, very, very, very good. if you finish this, you must take it to a publisher. it's awesome. nothing ...

well, if i ever figure out how to get the music written...i might upload a vid of it somewhere, and if so i'll give you the link

omigosh, i have the best Bartemius quote ever!! " Bartemius says , Eat your vegetables. - Your mom." lol! actually, i like the homer simpson ones a lot... oh, right, ...

I know, I know. Another work by me. You're all getting sick of it, I know you are. Sure we are, Jabber, but no one except me would actually tell ...

He paces his quarters, One hand on his belt. The other, beside him, Gloved in fine lion's pelt. The firelight warms him, Though not to the core. He sobs with ...